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Identity Feedback Page

  • daniel2492
  • Nov 17, 2021
  • 1 min read

Feedback Page for the Identity Project

 
 
 

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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Jun 16, 2022

Dear student,


I am delighted to invite you to attend a pop up exhibition on Friday 17th June for the 2021/2022 GCSE Photography and Textiles cohort. The exhibition runs from 5pm to 6pm in room 3.12. Please bring your parents, so they may sample what you have been able to create this year!


Here is the poster for with additional information: http://msfittonart.weebly.com/uploads/1/2/6/1/126104236/plasma-exhibition-advert_orig.jpg


Best wishes,

Ms Fitton

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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Feb 16, 2022

The images transfers for Salzwedel are really interesting, but don't stop there! You can edit these on Photoshop to make them look more like the artist's work. Turn them black and white, double expose images together. Print these off and physically manipulate the images e.g. burn, scratch, rip, place under water etc.


Remove the Eun-Sil Han, as you are not looking at their work anymore.


The fabric pieces are VERY exciting Daniel - well done! This needs to be refined a little more. When we return, you can use the Year 13 studio, so that the walls around are white are do not distract the viewer.

Make sure to add in some videos of the fabric moving to take this…

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daniel2492
Feb 16, 2022
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Thank you Miss; I appreciate the feedback

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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Feb 01, 2022

There is some strong work on your website Daniel. You have been working hard on your physical developments. I would make sure to log the process for this, so that it is not just the final outcome that is on your website. The examiner will be able to see the different steps it has taken to make your developments.


I think you need to consider your developments for your first artist by recreating what you have done with your second artist. Use the burnt edges or ripped edges in your second developments with your painted pieces with the fountains for your first.


It may also be interesting to print your Salzwedel developments onto cartridge paper so that you are able…

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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Dec 06, 2021

For your second artist, look at the work of Brooks Salzwede.

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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Dec 01, 2021

Peer Assessment 01.12.2021

Assessor: Emma Alexander


I really liked the layout of your website. It was well organised and clear to read. There was a good range of composition in your images.


Maybe for your next developments you could take more photos against a white background, and perhaps take some with man made elements, e.g. a vase or hands. Or you could print out the edits and make them seem more antiquated.


Overall, your first developments are really good and maybe in your second developments you could use only one object in your composition. Another idea could be to take more photos of animals, but only if that is possible.

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