I can see that you are beginning to develop your work through image transfer, this is really exciting and shows that you are taking risks Jane (AO2). Your analysis is of a very high quality and shows your understanding of your artist really well (AO1). Ensure you add your own opinion of the work to establish your views, informed by your analysis.
To improve, you need to ensure that you are reflecting on your work more in your annotation (AO3). Make sure to highlight success, so that you are able to talk about your work, in depth, to articulate how you have incorporated your artist’s work into your own creative journey (AO1).
Peer Assessment 1/12/21
Assessor: John Smith
I can see that you are beginning to develop your work through image transfer, this is really exciting and shows that you are taking risks Jane (AO2). Your analysis is of a very high quality and shows your understanding of your artist really well (AO1). Ensure you add your own opinion of the work to establish your views, informed by your analysis.
To improve, you need to ensure that you are reflecting on your work more in your annotation (AO3). Make sure to highlight success, so that you are able to talk about your work, in depth, to articulate how you have incorporated your artist’s work into your own creative journey (AO1).