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  • Writer: Anastasia L
    Anastasia L
  • Nov 17, 2021
  • 1 min read

Unit 2 - Identity

 
 
 

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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Jun 16, 2022

Dear student,


I am delighted to invite you to attend a pop up exhibition on Friday 17th June for the 2021/2022 GCSE Photography and Textiles cohort. The exhibition runs from 5pm to 6pm in room 3.12. Please bring your parents, so they may sample what you have been able to create this year!


Here is the poster for with additional information: http://msfittonart.weebly.com/uploads/1/2/6/1/126104236/plasma-exhibition-advert_orig.jpg


Best wishes,

Ms Fitton

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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Feb 16, 2022

Thank you for highlighting success in your work Anastasia. Please continue to do this throughout your work, so that you can show you can select successful work.


I would like to see some of the behind the scenes of your photos, so that it is clear what the viewer is looking at. Document the process of you making the 3D pieces - only those that have seen the cardboard know how these were done.

Try to create some of the clipped pieces that Rossato makes.


I am excited to see what you do with Reynolds. Remember to avoid using images from the internet. Go to a library and find buildings that you can find easily in London. Take pictures of…

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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Jan 30, 2022

I'm really impressed with the physical developments for Rossato - well done Anastasia!


To get that 9 , however, you need to be more rigorous with your work.


We have talked about using tracing paper and acetate to layer your work and play around with transparency. I recently mentioned about creating some videos using your different physical layers. By creating a film, you are showing you can try different disciplines in Photography.


For your first artist, you can create something like this to then help link your second artist into your work. https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/564568503296901463/

https://www.pinterest.co.uk/pin/9218374223222389/

Alternatively, please look at my Pinterest board for ideas: https://www.pinterest.co.uk/MissKFitton/identity/


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Holland Park School KFI
Holland Park School KFI
Dec 06, 2021

For your second artist, please look at the work of Caterina Rossato.

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akizic1
Dec 01, 2021

Peer assessment 1/12/21


Assessor: Andrija Zivojinovic


I like the layout and design of the website, and the effort you put into the analyses. However, you should add to your photoshoot plan, by saying if your plan worked out and if you changed anything

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