I am delighted to invite you to attend a pop up exhibition on Friday 17th June for the 2021/2022 GCSE Photography and Textiles cohort. The exhibition runs from 5pm to 6pm in room 3.12. Please bring your parents, so they may sample what you have been able to create this year!
There is some good work emerging on your website Jacob - well done!
I think image DSC_0065 is really exciting - I would like to see more like this. It seems that your images for these developments are not of a high quality. Consider reprinting the images and taking new photos. Add some more quick developments by mirroring your work like you did with your earlier digital work. You don't have to just use the same angle to take your pictures - you could use a lower angle so that you are able to see the different layers of your work.
Your developments for your second artist are really interesting! You now need to explore film like we have discussed…
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Jacob McGrath
Feb 21, 2022
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Thanks for the feedback! I am glad you think that the work has become more interesting, and I have been doing work with film and Draxler over the half term, although I’ve yet to complete it (as well as some Glajcar developments). Sorry about the speed at which I’ve been adding things - it’s been a rather frantic couple of days so I haven’t had as much spare time as I expected.
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Holland Park School KFI
Feb 01, 2022
There is lots to celebrate with your work Jacob. The developments that you have completed for your first artist are really complex and you have done them successfully - well done! It would be good to see the process of this, to show the other teachers and examiners how you have completed this work. This can be in film form, e.g. filing your screen whilst editing or it could be screenshots of Photoshop.
It would be exciting to see you incorporate some film into your work. You can use one of the cut out images as a template and then move the images underneath to create either a stop motion animation, where you use lots of photos or you film…
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Holland Park School KFI
Dec 06, 2021
For your second artist, please look at the work of Pablo Thecuadro.
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Holland Park School KFI
Dec 01, 2021
Peer Assessment 1/12/21
Assessor: Jacques Kuzminski
Your analysis is very detailed and helps give insight into your work and realize your thought process. The actual photography is also very good with it being absolutely clear how you've inspired by Jesse Draxler, capturing many of the elements of his own work.
To improve, I would recommend trying to blend the multiple faces in each photo whether that be through double exposure or something else. I believe this would make the photos seem more smooth and better recreate the artist.
Furthermore, I could not think of anything really that could be better than the confident and assured work that you have produced, however, I would recommend that in order to improve you…
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Jacob McGrath
Dec 02, 2021
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Thanks for the feedback; I will bear it in mind when furthering my work.
Dear student,
I am delighted to invite you to attend a pop up exhibition on Friday 17th June for the 2021/2022 GCSE Photography and Textiles cohort. The exhibition runs from 5pm to 6pm in room 3.12. Please bring your parents, so they may sample what you have been able to create this year!
Here is the poster for with additional information: http://msfittonart.weebly.com/uploads/1/2/6/1/126104236/plasma-exhibition-advert_orig.jpg
Best wishes,
Ms Fitton
There is some good work emerging on your website Jacob - well done!
I think image DSC_0065 is really exciting - I would like to see more like this. It seems that your images for these developments are not of a high quality. Consider reprinting the images and taking new photos. Add some more quick developments by mirroring your work like you did with your earlier digital work. You don't have to just use the same angle to take your pictures - you could use a lower angle so that you are able to see the different layers of your work.
Your developments for your second artist are really interesting! You now need to explore film like we have discussed…
There is lots to celebrate with your work Jacob. The developments that you have completed for your first artist are really complex and you have done them successfully - well done! It would be good to see the process of this, to show the other teachers and examiners how you have completed this work. This can be in film form, e.g. filing your screen whilst editing or it could be screenshots of Photoshop.
It would be exciting to see you incorporate some film into your work. You can use one of the cut out images as a template and then move the images underneath to create either a stop motion animation, where you use lots of photos or you film…
For your second artist, please look at the work of Pablo Thecuadro.
Peer Assessment 1/12/21
Assessor: Jacques Kuzminski
Your analysis is very detailed and helps give insight into your work and realize your thought process. The actual photography is also very good with it being absolutely clear how you've inspired by Jesse Draxler, capturing many of the elements of his own work.
To improve, I would recommend trying to blend the multiple faces in each photo whether that be through double exposure or something else. I believe this would make the photos seem more smooth and better recreate the artist.
Furthermore, I could not think of anything really that could be better than the confident and assured work that you have produced, however, I would recommend that in order to improve you…