I am delighted to invite you to attend a pop up exhibition on Friday 17th June for the 2021/2022 GCSE Photography and Textiles cohort. The exhibition runs from 5pm to 6pm in room 3.12. Please bring your parents, so they may sample what you have been able to create this year!
There is still a substantial lack of work on your website Tomas. This is really stopping you from doing well in this subject. I have explained everything that I want you to do with each artist, but it is not happening.
I cannot offer feedback to work that is not on your website. I hope that there is work that you have done that is not yet uploaded. Please ensure this is all uploaded by Wednesday's lesson (23/2). I will then ask you to come to compulsory Intervention until I am happy with your progress. Your parents will also be spoken to on Monday to inform them of your lack of work, so that we can offer support to help…
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Holland Park School KFI
Jan 30, 2022
There is little change with your portfolio as of late Tomas, which is concerning. I have told you many times that you need to bring in objects to collect together and present like Rosenthal, yet this work is not evident on your website.
Please complete your second developments from your first artist to show how you are exploring your work in different ways.
I need to see substantial work being completed for independent study, otherwise you are wasting your potential in this subject.
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Holland Park School KFI
Dec 06, 2021
For your second artist, please look at the work of Barry Rosenthal.
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Holland Park School KFI
Dec 01, 2021
Peer assessment 01/12/2021
Assessor: Zakim Kaingu Fedi
I can see that you have taken a variety of images for the artist you have chosen, and ensured that what you have produced links to the artist in a depth greater than simple similarity. Your analysis is also at quite a high level.
However you could improve your work by trying to develop it further and taking risks, try to incorporate some mixed media or burn your images. You should also ensure that you have added your highlighting success and whilst your analysis is good you could incorporate more insightful information and higher level language.
Dear student,
I am delighted to invite you to attend a pop up exhibition on Friday 17th June for the 2021/2022 GCSE Photography and Textiles cohort. The exhibition runs from 5pm to 6pm in room 3.12. Please bring your parents, so they may sample what you have been able to create this year!
Here is the poster for with additional information: http://msfittonart.weebly.com/uploads/1/2/6/1/126104236/plasma-exhibition-advert_orig.jpg
Best wishes,
Ms Fitton
There is still a substantial lack of work on your website Tomas. This is really stopping you from doing well in this subject. I have explained everything that I want you to do with each artist, but it is not happening.
I cannot offer feedback to work that is not on your website. I hope that there is work that you have done that is not yet uploaded. Please ensure this is all uploaded by Wednesday's lesson (23/2). I will then ask you to come to compulsory Intervention until I am happy with your progress. Your parents will also be spoken to on Monday to inform them of your lack of work, so that we can offer support to help…
There is little change with your portfolio as of late Tomas, which is concerning. I have told you many times that you need to bring in objects to collect together and present like Rosenthal, yet this work is not evident on your website.
Please complete your second developments from your first artist to show how you are exploring your work in different ways.
I need to see substantial work being completed for independent study, otherwise you are wasting your potential in this subject.
For your second artist, please look at the work of Barry Rosenthal.
Peer assessment 01/12/2021
Assessor: Zakim Kaingu Fedi
I can see that you have taken a variety of images for the artist you have chosen, and ensured that what you have produced links to the artist in a depth greater than simple similarity. Your analysis is also at quite a high level.
However you could improve your work by trying to develop it further and taking risks, try to incorporate some mixed media or burn your images. You should also ensure that you have added your highlighting success and whilst your analysis is good you could incorporate more insightful information and higher level language.