There is a lot missing on your website at the moment Niki, which is really concerning at this point in the project. We only have 2 more weeks of this project and a final piece has to be completed in this time. It is imperative that you upload everything that you have done so far with your work and annotate it by Wednesday.
You need more developments for your second artist. You can create some quick ones by double exposing your images and mirroring them too.
There is much to be done on your website Niki - please give yourself small, achievable targets to complete each day, so that you are on track to finish the project on time.
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Holland Park School KFI
Jan 30, 2022
Well done for succeeding in creating your second artist edits - these are really hard to do!
However, it is only the 3 developments that you have for the artist's work. There are many other tasks that you are yet to complete. Please make sure that you are showing that you are completing work independently. I gave you the video over 3 weeks ago, so I would expect to see a lot more than 3 edits on your website.
You images need to be more dynamic. Please complete a reshoot thinking about how to capture the hands or body parts in a more exciting way.
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Holland Park School KFI
Dec 06, 2021
For your second artist, please look at the work of Mohammad Jamshidi, focussing on their typography/calligraphy portraits. https://www.pinterest.es/pin/176977460329664037/
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olivegrace0707
Dec 01, 2021
I love your project Niki! Even though I cave only seen a few of your edits I can already see your attention to detail (especially in your annotations) and strong links to the topic. I am really impressed!
I also love the fact that you have drawn the overlays yourself. They are beautiful and really compliment your photographs.
There is not much that you need to improve in in terms of quality however I think if you changed the colour of the background and the lay out of the pages, It would help to make your project look more exiting :)
Good luck!
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olivegrace0707
Dec 01, 2021
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This peer assessment was written by Olive-Grace Charles Zagacki on the 1/12/21
There is a lot missing on your website at the moment Niki, which is really concerning at this point in the project. We only have 2 more weeks of this project and a final piece has to be completed in this time. It is imperative that you upload everything that you have done so far with your work and annotate it by Wednesday.
You need more developments for your second artist. You can create some quick ones by double exposing your images and mirroring them too.
There is much to be done on your website Niki - please give yourself small, achievable targets to complete each day, so that you are on track to finish the project on time.
Well done for succeeding in creating your second artist edits - these are really hard to do!
However, it is only the 3 developments that you have for the artist's work. There are many other tasks that you are yet to complete. Please make sure that you are showing that you are completing work independently. I gave you the video over 3 weeks ago, so I would expect to see a lot more than 3 edits on your website.
You images need to be more dynamic. Please complete a reshoot thinking about how to capture the hands or body parts in a more exciting way.
For your second artist, please look at the work of Mohammad Jamshidi, focussing on their typography/calligraphy portraits. https://www.pinterest.es/pin/176977460329664037/
I love your project Niki! Even though I cave only seen a few of your edits I can already see your attention to detail (especially in your annotations) and strong links to the topic. I am really impressed!
I also love the fact that you have drawn the overlays yourself. They are beautiful and really compliment your photographs.
There is not much that you need to improve in in terms of quality however I think if you changed the colour of the background and the lay out of the pages, It would help to make your project look more exiting :)
Good luck!