There is some good work emerging on your website Talea!
Double expose the tracing paper on the lightbox images with the tracing paper pieces, normal paper pieces and the original digital developments. Explore saturation with this, so that the layers are more dynamic. You could even tint some of the layers by changing the blending option of a 'color fill' layer.
You are yet to add your framed images for your first artist. If you don't do this, you do not show a sound understanding of the artist, as they are known for their series of works. These can be done easily on Photoshop or by placing them into frames.
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Holland Park School KFI
Feb 02, 2022
Your writing throughout your website is really strong Talea - well done!
You need to create the frame edits for your first artist to show that you understand how the artist groups images together. Yours are currently individual images.
The Hockney developments are looking good. I want you to consider how you are attaching the images when you are doing them physically. You could sew the images together like Anagret Soltau.
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Holland Park School KFI
Dec 07, 2021
For your second artist, please look at the work of David Hockney, focussing on their photography joiners.
Your work is really good as all your analysis is in extreme depth and you even annotated your contact sheets , which is really good.
You did take many photos with a variety of objects but with the same background which is what Taryn Simon does do but later on you should experiment with trying different things such as: physical copies, experimenting and taking risks to get a very good final product if you do it right. Try and finishing all of your work and create a variety of developments. Your work is really good, keep it up!!!
There is some good work emerging on your website Talea!
Double expose the tracing paper on the lightbox images with the tracing paper pieces, normal paper pieces and the original digital developments. Explore saturation with this, so that the layers are more dynamic. You could even tint some of the layers by changing the blending option of a 'color fill' layer.
You are yet to add your framed images for your first artist. If you don't do this, you do not show a sound understanding of the artist, as they are known for their series of works. These can be done easily on Photoshop or by placing them into frames.
Your writing throughout your website is really strong Talea - well done!
You need to create the frame edits for your first artist to show that you understand how the artist groups images together. Yours are currently individual images.
The Hockney developments are looking good. I want you to consider how you are attaching the images when you are doing them physically. You could sew the images together like Anagret Soltau.
For your second artist, please look at the work of David Hockney, focussing on their photography joiners.
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Peer Assessment 1/12/21
Assessor: Tomas Trancas
Your work is really good as all your analysis is in extreme depth and you even annotated your contact sheets , which is really good.
You did take many photos with a variety of objects but with the same background which is what Taryn Simon does do but later on you should experiment with trying different things such as: physical copies, experimenting and taking risks to get a very good final product if you do it right. Try and finishing all of your work and create a variety of developments. Your work is really good, keep it up!!!